Jason-san, another Sailorearth writer, did a kawaii review of PSE! I just couldn't edit out the dialogue that ensude from my senshi and his senshi interacting. It started from when we were talking about Sailorearth's/Mamoru in general.

*sighs* One of these days, I'm gonna have to ask what it is with him and swords. Anyway, on with the review.

Ryoku: About time, too.

Urusai! I suppose you want in on this, too?

Ryoku: *shrugs* It's your review.

*mutters* Bakayarou.... Anyway, here it is.

Like I said before, this is a great story. I love the theme of infinity, life, and energy laced throughout the entire fic. The alternate sign of Earth - the infinity symbol - certainly heralds the beginning of a different type of Sailorearth. The shift from earth-based attacks to ones of life and its energies is refreshingly different. If there is anything negative I would have to say about this fic overall, it would be that it seemed a bit rushed to me; going from SM S to past Stars and into Crystal Tokyo in only 29 chapters and an epilogue. Then again, my time sense may be biased by my own fic - in which 29 chapters would cover only one season/series on average. But then, one does have to consider that most of that time, Moshi was in the future saving... well, herself, and in the process, over a year passed in which she was not present. That would take out a good deal; like Minako said, "We've defeated the Deathbusters, Nehelenia and Galaxia. She missed quite a lot."

Now, for individual stuff.

Ryoku: Oh goodie!

If I didn't know any better, I'd say you were mocking me. But you wouldn't be doing that 'cause you know I'd kill you if you did, ne?

Ryoku: *BIG sweats* Ehehehe.... If you need me, I'll just be talking with Moshi-chan....

*nods* I thought as much. Anyway.... The entrance of Sailorearth as a koneko-chan was nice. I suppose if she was working by herself for as long as she has, the ring of metamorphosis would be a useful tool. After all, Usagi's got a disguise pen.

As for when Moshi discovers the identities of Uranus, Neptune, and Pluto, I'm a bit confused; is it before or after the other Senshi discover their identities. Myself, I would think it would be after, due to the fact that Pluto only left the Time Gate near the end of the confrontation with the Deathbusters. If so, then why didn't Moshi also learn of their identities along with the other Senshi? But, from what I can make of the storyline's timeline, the events were taking place BEFORE the Deathbusters, otherwise Minako wouldn't have metioned Moshi's having missed the Deathbusters. See why I'm confused?

Ryoku: *blinks* Nani?!?

Sailor Cyberearth.... All I can say is... kakkoi! I figure that metals do fall into the juristiction of the Earth as well, ne? Giving Sailorearth the power to add to the Senshi's own powers(Aqua Boogie *snicker*) is very good. It has been said that great minds think alike; I was actually going to be using that same idea in my own fic. Also, the fact that you had Moshi's younger daughter inherit the powers of Sailorearth instead of the daughter was interesting. Makes for an interesting emotional dilemma, ne? The older daughter, sure of being the one to inherit her mother's legacy, gets passed up by her imouto-chan. Ah, drama. Also, having a new Tuxedo Kamen, played by Moshi, a.k.a Sailorparadise, the niece of the original, was also an interesting turn of events. I like how you gave Tuxedo Kamen powers of her own. The original never did have any powers, at least, not in the anime. Myself, I'm considering giving him a power of his own in a later series.... ^_~

The fact that you gave Sailorearth a mission different than the other Senshi intrigued me. You wrote that her mission was originally to protect the Earth. I assume that when you say that, you meant her mission before she joined up with the Sailor Senshi(to me, this implies that she had recently changed her mission), because afterwards you wrote that her mission was to not only protect the Earth, but those who protect it and the Princess. Actually, I think that adding 'the Princess' to 'those who protect it' is sort of redundant, since the Princess, Sailor Moon, is one of those who protect the Earth, ne?

Lastly, the method of which you brought about the creation of Crystal Tokyo, Revenge of Gaia, was a nice touch. I also considered using something like that(something along the lines of using all of the Senshi's highest powers along with Sailor Moon's Silver Crystal power at full force filtered and amplified through Sailor Knight's Ginzuishouken), but I'm still in the plotting process of that part of my own fic. ^_^

In short, this was a great fic. I liked it, and I look forward to reading the Utopian Chronicles and the histories. *grins*

Well, that's it for me. I've gotta get back to writing Chapter 9 of Alone No More. I'm one chapter away from the end of the Sailor V manga and the beginning of Sailor V and Masked Knight's trip to England. I'm close to finished with the first story of The Question as well. ^_^ I'd better get started, then. Well, ja ne, Tory-san!

Jason Ulloa